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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Just do it If you need to pursue it And it’s worthy and right, Go on and do it, Give up the fight. If it’s driving you nuts, Take on the dare To get out of the ruts That are going nowhere. Oil in a cruet And vinegar seeps Onto a salad Where flavor reaps Pleasure to palate And satisfied taste. On Blueprints today, Tomorrow is traced. Barb Gedman |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Barb, as always, I find great wisdom in your short and sweet renditions.. I don't understand this though: Oil in a cruet And vinegar seeps Onto a salad Where flavor reaps Pleasure to palate And satisfied taste. On Blueprints today, Tomorrow is traced. could you explain the imagery? I really like this anyway ![]() Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Thanks for you nice comments, Michelle. I meant it as satisifaction that comes from fulfilled desire. Love, Barb |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Great job Barb. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Barb: I really like this. It has great tempo to it. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Barb, This is really great! Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Ooh Barb ![]() Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Barb A 'tasteful' poem. I like it. Love Isobel |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Barb~ Ahhhh, it just poured down the page~ DELIGHTFUL~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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