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PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

0 posted 2004-04-30 10:43 PM

Heart Shattered
Pat Valle

Oh heart! Shattered
like the ax on a fallen tree.
No more will the song of love
fill my endless dreams.

Your words of empty promises
deceived my trusting heart,
casting shadows like darkened
alleyways, leaving behind these
endless tears.

Had I known of the secrets
which lay hidden to me,
pain and sorrow would not follow,
and I would be free.

As a new day approaches,
perhaps another will come.
Spreading petals of roses,
instead of broken dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-05-01 12:36 PM

MyFriend~
You already know what I think of the sadness
of this emote from the heart~
I *hug* you with deep care and understanding~

You are a beautiful soul ...
I am so glad you are my friend
and I wish I was there to *hug* you in person~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

2 posted 2004-05-01 03:04 PM

so sad and so true...
why must the tender hearted be hurt so...
once upon a time...
thank you for sharing
daniel

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2004-05-01 07:18 PM

Very sad. you and Tramp Poet are thinking very much the same today. Love, joyce

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-02 06:10 AM

oh how beautifully sad

kernow
New Member

since 2004-05-02

Posts 1
United Kingdom

5 posted 2004-05-02 03:20 PM

With the setting of the sun, the awakening of the night, comes the dawn of a new day and a new beginning.

Thinking of you Pat. -Doug

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Coaching you through the fog of life, to a brighter self-esteem:
http://www.lifesight.net
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2004-05-02 10:37 PM

PatAngel: This is beautifully written but oh, so sad!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

TheGoalie
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 47
Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny

7 posted 2004-05-03 03:45 AM

"As a new day approaches,
perhaps another will come.
Spreading petals of roses,
instead of broken dreams."

Damn. Ya'll are going to make me cry tonight. Bittersweet poem because it is well written, but wrought of sorrow. A new day will indeed come, and all you have to do until then is dream of rose petals, and then even the broken dreams seem sweet.

-Joey

Isobel
Senior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

8 posted 2004-05-03 04:18 AM

Dear PatAngel

How sad indeed. Only written from a heart that knows pain too well. May God carry some of your burden.

Love Isobel ox

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

9 posted 2004-05-12 04:27 AM

i looked you up to look for more of your work but have only been able to find 2 of your poems...do you run a poetry page? i'd love to read more of your work
please email
[email protected]

Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel
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PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

10 posted 2004-05-12 10:20 AM

Dear Destiny,

So far I have only written three poems in the last couple of years. I hadn't intended to share them at that time. I'm glad I did now. Thank you again for your response.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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