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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2004-04-28 11:50 AM



Birdseed in feeders
Visited by birds of Spring
New song in the air

These fine-feathered friends
Jockeying for position
Envied by squirrels

'Bove grassy carpet
Avian epicureans
Dine in best attire


4-28-2004

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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2004-04-28 05:41 PM


Dennis; This is so very clever! I love it! the King of Haiku reigns! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-02 06:13 AM


nice
BloomingRose
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3 posted 2004-05-15 07:36 AM


Love the way you describe the quest of the birds in nature. Such fun!
Well done.

Deb

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4 posted 2004-05-15 04:43 PM


Dennis~

I just love the birds
And sweet songs they are singing
Harmonizing Spring~


GOOD to see you with this delight of Spring, my friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-05-15 06:06 PM


Excellent...I love these!!


The first sign of spring ~
robin eyes her new red blouse
in this rain puddle.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

midnightblues
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6 posted 2004-05-16 10:55 AM


this is sweet! =)

Love
MiCheLLe

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