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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Lifeblood Razor sharp steel slides into... bitter taste springs to throat as blade slides into belly. “Stupid Warrior, pay attention” demon cackles, twisting a hole lifeblood spills to earth. True, it’s true what they say about this life’s review in slow motion, livid color. She steps forth all “innocent” harvests “warriors” broken heart finding it flawed, tis tossed away. Noble warrior, broken warrior weeps for those who consume as demon plunges, laughing. the “innocent” takes the fall the “warrior” takes no heart as...lifeblood spills to earth ~~~She paints herself into favorite corner, safe retreat... drawing her guards, with lifeblood.~~~ ~~~~~~~~~  [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (04-25-2004 09:49 PM).] |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
there is no escape from what sleeps in your mind , even a blade of blood will not end what you have begun if suicide has crossed yor mind let that thought pass right out the window life is more than you could imagine vivid poem , dark forum would be better for this - wolf |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
sorry if piece is too obtuse... is dealing with an "innocent" who uses and hides behind pet demons who do the dirty work. Also; the destruction of the one assigned to protect... once realized; hides from the actions in a "corner/sactuary"... and yet is still using the "warrior". Never truly realizing the one utterly destroyed is the "innocent" lol... all that and a bag of chips! agreed wolf...tis dark my apologies your perception appreciated cheers! [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (04-24-2004 12:21 AM).] |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol tram thanks for the reply , now it is so clear to me , i am sorry to have not seen the story , it is awesome ...i understand it well now , thanks for the info , and the chips lol , i just wanted to make sure you were ok  and as i see it your doin better than me hahaa peace brother poet -wolf |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
ok bro what do you think now the last line has been changed? does it leave the source of her "ink" up to the reader? |
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