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Nom/I tried to forget u

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-04-16 10:51 PM

Nom

Why does the world
throw me away?
Every love
slips through my hand.
I am to old
to be alone.
I tried to forget you.

I tried to forget you
and what more can be said.
Every memory.
Each and every one.

I could not forget you.
you were every where.
Embedded in my mind.
urging insanity

I'll never forget you
I clearly see that now.
Can't decide my future
I still plan to move on.

Did you ever forget
or are you just heartless?
Do you think about me?
Deep down do you love me?
Juju
With love

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-04-18 10:05 AM

JuJu~
Such heartfelt emotions ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

2 posted 2004-04-19 12:53 PM

Dear Juju,

Reading your poem stirred deep feelings of betrayal from someone I loved dearly. I felt the emotions as if I were living it all over again. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

Love,
Patricia

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

3 posted 2004-04-19 12:17 PM

Clearly pain inspired this piece, my heart goes out to you.

Sparticus.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-04-19 11:17 PM

Dear Marge T.
Thank you for you commet. I am glad you thought so.

Dear Patangel,

I am glad you liked this. it is actualy two pieces, but looking at them they are really one. I am glad you like it. Some of my old poems are quite powerful. My story is more of just a scramble of events in my teen life and really refeer to many events.

Dear sparticus.

I am glad you took time to read this. I am not a popular read here, but in my school I am like the top five of poets(we kinda tie)
so I learn lots here. Alot of my poems come from the heart, others are stories. You can tell the difference.

Lots of love
JUju

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