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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-04-16 10:51 PM


Nom

Why does the world
throw me away?
Every love
slips through my hand.
I am to old
to be alone.
I tried to forget you.


I tried to forget you
and what more can be said.
Every memory.
Each and every one.

I could not forget you.
you were every where.
Embedded in my mind.
urging insanity

I'll never forget you
I clearly see that now.
Can't decide my future
I still plan to move on.

Did you ever forget
or are you just heartless?
Do you think about me?
Deep down do you love me?
Juju
With love


© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-04-18 10:05 AM


JuJu~
Such heartfelt emotions ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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2 posted 2004-04-19 12:53 PM


Dear Juju,

Reading your poem stirred deep feelings of betrayal from someone I loved dearly. I felt the emotions as if I were living it all over again. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

Love,
Patricia

Sparticus
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3 posted 2004-04-19 12:17 PM


Clearly pain inspired this piece, my heart goes out to you.

Sparticus.

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2004-04-19 11:17 PM


Dear Marge T.
Thank you for you commet. I am glad you thought so.

Dear Patangel,

I am glad you liked this. it is actualy two pieces, but looking at them they are really one. I am glad you like it. Some of my old poems are quite powerful. My story is more of just a scramble of events in my teen life and really refeer to many events.

Dear sparticus.

I am glad you took time to read this. I am not a popular read here, but in my school I am like the top five of poets(we kinda tie)
so I learn lots here. Alot of my poems come from the heart, others are stories. You can tell the difference.


Lots of love
JUju

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