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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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choices, again she is standing just out of reach feet anchored into the dark rock she is calling, crying, reaching out. taken prisoner of the darkness it swirls about, wrapping, closing laughing it keeps her rooted, captive. knowing she is looking at her doom destruction of own deceived choice darkness coils about in victory. all her hopes, dreams and desires lay as ashes at immobilized feet stirred slightly with disdain by darkness. her choice made, she ran away into the arms of the one who deceived one who lied, enticed, now kills slowly. made herself a prisoner of darkness the light of truth barely discernible she knows, terribly; what has been done. reaching out, silently she screams her eyes filled with dark terror she realizes, she has acted on lies. from the pits of hell comes laughter they come for her, to drag her down rejected protector weeps in defeat. ~~~~~~  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
very sad and touching. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ This cries with the ache of not being able to help someone whose choices have come back to haunt them~ Poignantly done~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
I loved the ending to this...great work.  |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Oh how beautifully you pen your words. This one is a very deep sad tale and you did an amazing job of writing it. I was dragged through the pain of this, and the rejection of the watcher in the last line. You truly are a poet of class hon. hugs from june x |
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