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junemac
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0 posted 2004-04-12 03:31 PM


I am sorry I haven't been around for a while everyone. I have had a few personal problems and have left it too long ( felt it would be hard catching up even though i missed you all ) I have written a few poems though and if you all don't mind I would be very pleased if you took me back under your wings.
Marge has kindly not forgotten about me and I can't thank you enough Marge for caring enough to contact me. You are a wonderful person and i have mised you very much hon xxxxx

thanks to all and I would like to dedicate this lil poem to MARGE. XXXXXXXXX
LAST DANCE FOR GRACE


Softly the notes began
Slowly they evolved from silence
Rising like heat haze in the sun

Scent of lilacs drifted into the room
Like the trail left by a bridal bouquet
Yet the room held no living soul

As the melody rose, it filled the space
Haunting the room with its sweetness
Taunting the spirits with it’s grace

Then as if drawn to the forgotten music
Dancing right through the windows,
The winds tore into the old music room

Awakened by natures breeze driven dance
A graceful iridescentfigure appeared
and for one brief moment she waltzed again.

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-04-12 04:29 PM


"Awakened by natures breeze driven dance
A graceful iridescentfigure appeared
and for one brief moment she waltzed again."

June, you have not been forgotten..
so may I say Welcome Home!
This piece is very very lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

wings of the moon
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2 posted 2004-04-12 05:18 PM


Indeed. Beautiful poem. Stay for a cuppa?

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-04-12 06:04 PM


June~
I'm so glad to see you girlie girl~

You are never far from my thoughts ... thank you for coming in and leaving us a real beauty ... AND ... mucho for the dedication to Moi'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

junemac
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4 posted 2004-04-12 06:11 PM


Nancy thanks for that lovely welcome and i am thrilled you enjoyed this one :0)
I have a few more but would like to take time to read one or two other posts and reply before posting any more.
Trouble is i am off on my holiday at the end of this week so time is limited lol.

so much to do and so little time to do it in !!!!!

thanks again, i feel so lucky to be invited back here.
hugs june x

junemac
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5 posted 2004-04-12 06:12 PM


Nancy thanks for that lovely welcome and i am thrilled you enjoyed this one :0)
I have a few more but would like to take time to read one or two other posts and reply before posting any more.
Trouble is i am off on my holiday at the end of this week so time is limited lol.

so much to do and so little time to do it in !!!!!

thanks again, i feel so lucky to be invited back here.
hugs june x

junemac
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6 posted 2004-04-12 06:13 PM


Awww thank you 'wings of the moon' ( love that name by the way )

I would love a cuppa right now lol.
hugs from june x

junemac
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7 posted 2004-04-12 06:15 PM


Thanks Marge,
see how quickly i headed back here hon ? I did so miss you all and especially your lovely work.
I am off for a read now and maybe will have time to comment on one or two. :0)

squishy thanky hugs from june x

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2004-04-13 07:12 AM


I have missed you Junemac.  This is lovely.  Welcome back.  Love, Joyce
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9 posted 2004-04-13 04:57 PM


Junemac:  I have missed your poetry and this is a lovely way to re-enter the site!  I enjoyed it so much!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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10 posted 2004-04-13 05:20 PM


Dear Joyce,
I have missed you too. It is lovely to be back and even though my pc is playing up, I have managed to post on here. I hope to catch up a little soon.
hugs from june x

ellie LeJeune
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11 posted 2004-04-14 09:52 PM


Hauntingly lovely, June..seems we've both been away...but we're baaack! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

junemac
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12 posted 2004-04-15 03:25 AM


Yeaa it is great to be back isn't Ellie,
(Trouble is i am off on holiday on saturday, so will be missing for a short time again lol )
hugs and welcome back from june x

Isobel
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13 posted 2004-04-15 04:11 AM


Dear June

Have you ever heard of the phrase, "Gone but not forgotten".  Your poetry is forever etched in our memories.

Welcome back!  What a wonderful entrance. So GRACEful!

Love Isobel ox


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