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Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2004-03-17 05:41 PM

Coming Attractions

“Equitant iris, reach out for my eye.

Dazzled in azure, as blue as the sky,

Some of your blooms are creamy and pale.

Your flower is dainty but not at all frail.”

I gather the view on a print in my mind.

I know other flowers are not far behind.

Hope-lavished spring has summer in tow.

Thank God for seasons; I’m tired of snow.

Barb Gedman

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-03-17 09:47 PM

Barb~
What a lovely lilting rhyme~

I wish you meadows
full of Spring
And all of the flowers
that nature can bring~

Hey ... thank you SO much for the nice, nice comments on the stuff I post down here in the Pub~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2004-03-17 10:14 PM

Dear Barb:

This is just a lovely spring poem and I love it! Thanks for posting it here.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

3 posted 2004-03-18 06:24 AM

Thanks for the nice, comments Marge and Betty.
I am in my glory being "wrapped in the rhyme" of my fellow poets.
Love,Barb

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-03-18 09:09 AM

Barb~
I could not help but come back in with this beauty for you~

Knowing you will enjoy it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

5 posted 2004-03-18 12:48 PM

I sure do enjoy it. Thanks for the one you sent with my poem on it. I sent it to my friend and she said, "Wow!"
Love, Barb

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2004-03-18 01:31 PM

Dear Barb, this is a lovely rhyme about the wonders of spring. May spring linger. Love, Joyce

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

7 posted 2004-03-18 06:02 PM

I really liked this one keep up the great work!

Isobel
Senior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

8 posted 2004-03-20 09:20 AM

Dear Barb

Nice write. I love the title.

Love Isobel ox

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-03-21 07:36 PM

AMEN!

I don't have snow but the the cold has been quite enough for me

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