Tis All Thy Needs To prove

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Tis All Thy Needs To prove

PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-03-13 02:57 PM

Amidst the darkest hour,
thee came resiliently;
like a bee tends to the flo'er,
to thy breast thee came to be.

We traversed under full moon,
as the nightingale sang above,
with his divinely whimsical tune;
our hearts fell deeply in love.

Then thy heart was redirected,
to the waning hour of the night,
as the morning light shown unexpected,
thy love faded from thy sight.

Thee left pleading to thy fleeting heart,
"adieu... adieu... remember thee!"
I swore to love in solemn oath to never part,
as long as waning sun doth kiss the sea!

And I swore thou lovest thee more and more,
as the hands of time doth move;
thy love is all I had before,
and tis all thy needs to prove!

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2004-03-13 03:31 PM

Dear Jared,

as always, I enjoyed your poem immensely... very classic way of writing

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

2 posted 2004-03-13 03:35 PM

thank you very much i'm glad you enjoy my writing

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