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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Sent: 01/03/2004 20:34 BLUEBELL She is one of a million delicate creatures Waltzing on a melody in the soft breeze A whim of sunshine highlight’s briefly the shimmering of her sapphire gown In a haze of blue beneath the woods she is shadowed by giant protectors If only she could sing a sweet lullaby her song would melt a million hearts Delicate flower of immeasurable beauty Cherished within her sisterhood home Deep in the heart of a hushed copse where a passing rainbow cried blue Her wildness may fool her admirers for she sways like a brazen maiden Her head shaking in a show of liberty but her nature is as soft as her petals She bruises with slightest brush of hand her slim petals can weep blue blood Left alone in the wilderness she thrives Touch and you sentence her to death |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oooh this is lovely! I love it!!! Thanks for sharing this, you're such a dear! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Enchantingly lovely! Puts me in the mood for a Faerie visit! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is pretty but a little sad at the ending as this happens ever too much where beauty that's so pure and rare is always at risk! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always bloosom with poetry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Her wildness may fool her admirers for she sways like a brazen maiden Her head shaking in a show of liberty but her nature is as soft as her petals" Very very nicely written, and much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very much enjoyed the poem... Keep up the great work |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is beautiful, June. Very nice poem. I really enjoyed it. Love, Barb |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
hehe just had to read again still great |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: I loved this! Bluebells are one of my favorite flowers in the woods. I have them growing, in ours and many other lovelies too. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Indeed this is a lovely tribute to the delicate bluebell. Your words are worthy. Love, Joyce |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awww thanks to everyone for you very welcome and encouraging words. I am such a happy bunny fter reading them all. :0) x june xx |
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