Corner Pub #2 |
Blind It With Doubtful Haze |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Oh the captured heart does depart, that plagues thee where it dwell, dunned in cloaked darkness thy heart- from the eternal depths of Hell. Release the demons that possess, and the spirits you have overwrought; shower the victim you suppress- with crimson tears of thought. Punish him so that he may never be- and wrap in chains his heart, so he will never burden beauty, nor ever in it, be a part. Part with thee that know not, that know too much to ponder, that it is so fair to rot, 'neath the ground you wonder. And let not this heart gaze, the wonder of the night; blind it with doubtful haze, so in thee it may not delight! |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
I feel a lot of hurt in this write. Thank you for sharing. Love Isobel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great rhyming sad theme good write |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Intense, excellent! Grover. |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Very good! I love the medieval feel of it! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples." |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I read this... and formed a picture in my mind of a gentle man up in a castle tower penning his sad thoughts by candle light. I have to agree with it sounding midevil. I love it ~BWA~ |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Sad, yet powerful words. I loved the rhyming, and the way it all seemd to come together. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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