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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-03-02 04:03 PM

Fraility is thy heart,
that does not but doubt,
sowing the seed it does impart,
the harbored fear to sprout.

I bid thee questioning dame,
to doubt the uncertain night,
and all that she does claim,
for she submits to light.

Doubt the trueness of north star,
its guidance has been flawed;
its guiding light is not far,
from its ultimate withdraw.

Trust not the exquisite sunrise,
for she deceives in things to come,
to the day she does sensationalize,
the mundane she is to become.

Trust not the flames of sun,
or the passion amidst fire,
for their demise has begun,
and soon shall time expire.

I pray thee doubt not my heart,
for her virgin motives are true,
with your love she will never part,
nor even in death, say adieu!

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (03-02-2004 10:01 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2004-03-02 10:18 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, you write of emotions so well and your poetry is always beautiful poetry everyone can relate to, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-02 10:26 PM

Very nicely penned and much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

3 posted 2004-03-03 07:24 AM

Well, romantic, you write with passion!
love, Barb

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

4 posted 2004-05-06 03:31 PM

I had to reread this a couple of times. The emotions expressed are done so wonderfully. I really like it!

Thanks for sharing it here

~BWA~

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

5 posted 2004-05-07 02:56 AM

I enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for sharing.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

6 posted 2004-05-11 06:17 AM

Truly beautiful --
I will doubt not thy heart, nor thy words!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Dedreia
Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

7 posted 2004-05-12 12:51 PM

I liked this a lot. It reminds me of a situation I'm in. Thanks!
Dee

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

Dedreia
Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

8 posted 2004-05-12 12:52 PM

I liked this a lot. It reminds me of a situation I'm in. Thanks!
Dee

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

9 posted 2004-05-17 01:30 PM

As good as always! soulful read
Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-05-20 03:47 AM

nice!

Street Heart
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since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

11 posted 2004-06-01 02:42 AM

Jared,this is awesome! Reminds me of a work I had written after watching "The Prince Of Players" with Richard Burton.How thou dost speweth Edwardian english with such nimbleness! Loved it and am saving it,m'Lord!

Peace,Street Heart

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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