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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-02-28 09:15 PM


Oh! How I wish I were the horizon,
so that our crimson lips may align;
as your virgin-touch falls to my skin,
my life, with your's may intertwine.

I wish it were I that saw you first,
and bid thee farewell to the night-
that each morn' quench my thirst,
in the quest for your loving sight.

I pray to divinity to stand aside,
as the unloving night draws near-
that my heart may be purified,
through love's cleansing tear.

Oh! But most of all my love,
I wish my eyes steadfast,
that because you shine from up above,
our love, to time outlast!

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (02-28-2004 11:25 PM).]

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junemac
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1 posted 2004-02-29 08:12 AM


With a love and pasion like that, how could anyone fail to be begiled by you .... and this poem. great imagery threaded throughout too.

lovely passionately romantic ...... like you !!


hugs from june xxxxxxxx

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2 posted 2004-02-29 01:57 PM




(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Jared, I'm sure to your special someone you ARE the horizon in dreams and reality and your love will always be blessed by you, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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