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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Today is a day I'd rather give away I want to go nowhere At home I want to stay It's hard to understand No, I don't need a hand Trust me, I'm being fair This was never planned It's happened so fast Can't stay in the past I may not seem to care Because new things I've cast I do still love you But there's more I have to do I'm gonna go here and there Our friendship is never through I may not get the gold cup By trying to explain what's up I'm sorry for this ultimate affair But your best friend has grown up --This is a poem based off of something i just learned recently. I was getting more mature than my friends and it was aggrivating me. But I am always gonna be their friend. There's really good news though, this is the coolest scheme I think I've ever done in a poem!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there's a time for everything nice write |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
awesome poem , been in your spot once, things will get better ....... |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very much enjoyed this piece of work! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens...painfully true |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
It is hard when you have 'outgrown' your friends. Some catch up and some don't. But you still have fond memories and each of your friends have touched your heart in many different ways. Love Isobel |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
We all must grow up at our own pace. You are wise to recognize that. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brezee~ You held the theme well throughout the piece~ Nice work~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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