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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
In a dream she came to me, a maiden fair and true, she beckoned and pleed to thee, that I would never say adieu. I took her hand in mine, and swore my life to thee, that my life may be thine, was my heart's own decree. Her beauty was but an eclipse, masking the beauty of the moon, the red rose was shamed by her lips, as she sung her pleasant tune. The sparkling stars present, and sensational night skies, seemed so insignificant, to the light in her eyes. But soon darkness began to fade, as light began to dawn, and sure enough my oath betrayed, my lover's heart was gone. |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Such tenderness and sensitivity. You really have a gift for love poems. love, Barb |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Tragic but beautiful Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Wonderfully written. You certainly do have a flair for love poems. Love Isobel |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Jared, this is beautiful but so sad, sweet friend, I hope this never relates to you forever on and you find nothing but stars and sunshine in love, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what loss!  |
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