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The Long Winter |
Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
The Long Winter The day became weary And sped out of sight. It was gray and so dreary- Void of sunlight. Nighttime came early Clad in white drifts And the tease of the wind Whistled in shifts. Enough! Said we victims, Cold and homebound Where icicles hung And temps had gone down. Oh, glorious visions Dance in our heads While rainbows of tulips Still lay in their beds. Oh, lay thee down, winter- Go swiftly away And usher to minds A springtime clothed day. Where trumpets of daffodils Spill by the streams And verdant green landscapes Are more than daydreams. Barb Gedman |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: I like this so much! I think all of us who have been snow-bound for so many months are having these hallucinations of spring! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
yet another great poem continue the great work! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love this one, Barb. very melodious and melodramatic. Goodbye winter, hello spring. Love, Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Barb: u really do like to write about nature's seasons! and I love them all ^_^ Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Barb Is Betty Lou right? Hallucinations of Spring? Winter Madness? I pray for you all, that Spring will show itself sooooooooon! The poem is a delight. Love Isobel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I already am hallucinating of spring, though of course I do it twelve months a year, hehehe! (sigh) Spring is the happiest time of year as everything is reborn again and comes to life, yay, may the tulips sing and the robins dance, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barbara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent and triumphant! |
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