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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
If you had a choice, Would you wish your life was a tremendous gust of wind, Or a gentle tender breeze? Our lives are all interwined, Some would demand to dominate, Others pliable and giving, Many confused about their purpose in life. Sometimes I feel like Im a hurricane, bumping about fiercely without directions, hurtful and destructive, a confused soul. Other times I feel like Im a zephyr, slight, refreshing and in control, comprehensible, sensitive, compassionate, counting my blessings and being thankful, certain of my purpose in life. Wind is just moving air, it can do good things or bad. We can all create our own, and within a lifetime our souls brush against each other without realizing, the gentle touch that had caressed our cheeks, leaving us craving for that hint of gentleness once again, that little trace of magical contact... I would like to be that gentle breeze, creating just a small stir in your lives, leaving you with a hint of smile whenever you think of me.. What about you? Tell me what you would like to be.. ----------------------------------- Dear friends: It has been such a long time since I've written a poem.. I don't think this is good but it has a message which I'll really like to convey and hope that you'll share your thoughts with me ^_^ Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i would like to be an "echo"...so when the lonely call out...they always have someone to call back to them. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Who, me? Why I would like to be a tree and catch strong winds from o'er the sea and I would so be pleased to later there be gently breezed from the tips of my old branches down to my knees and when you came to share my shade I'd brag about the leaves I'd made and stand through summer and into fall and hold them tight 'till the colors fade |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetMichelle~ 'within a lifetime our souls brush against each other without realizing, the gentle touch that had caressed our cheeks' Doesn't get much lovelier than these thoughts~ I would like to be the breeze of sweet gentility To touch the cheek of those in need to lift a Spirit ... foreverly~ Sometimes the need would ask me to be stronger so that I could last so much longer blowing about this earthly plain to leave a *huglet* that would remain~ ~Thank you for the sweet inspire~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh see, this is nice, two beautiful breezy souls whisping around a beautiful proud tree... and u know them huglets is nice! LOL sure could use a cooling breeze tonight, the heat is terrible! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely thought. A gentle breeze can accomplish more than a hurricane sometimes. Love, Joyce |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Wisdom beyond your years! Grover. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wonderfully written thoughts Michelle ... enjoyed your perspective If I had to be something, perhaps an icicle ... revered by spring flowers ~~~ Droplets cling fast to an icicle their silent plea echoes in vain Mist gently lifts when the shade dissipates And then tears wet the dirt once again ~ Rex)>((((o> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I'd like to be the Chinook winds, enveloping you in the heart of grace, immersing you in the spirit of friendship, bring a waving smile to your face. Wild as the young hummingbird, cunning as the chipmunk, offering you friendship hugs, and wishes of joy and love. You truly are a zephyr of delight to all our earts, God Bless You, you'll be when you believe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear fellow poets: I am touched that you read and responded to this poem, it meant alot to me... and boy are you all so sweet, marvelous rendition coming from you I definitely enjoyed reading your ponders huGLetS to aLL Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I want to be different every day |
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