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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2004-02-07 07:27 PM


"Bang"

"Bang" the door closes,
And again my fear of execution chills my body.
I hold my hands around my ears,
But as soon as "he" walks in,
I'm lost from reality.

"he" is a detective, my shadow,
Always telling me who's spying on me.
"he" is a bully, a monster,
Always telling me terrifying stories.
"he" drives me to hurt my parents.

"I didn't know what I was doing.
Don't lock me out... don't lock me out...
I want to see my parents.
You keep me away from my parents.
I hate all of you..."

"Bang" again the door closes,
Poor soul, no counsellor tries to console him,
Poor babe, none understands him.
All we know is to lock him jail,
All we know is to isolate him.

Author Note: A question to you all: Do Psychos deserve love too?

(c)Feb 6, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2004 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-07 10:45 PM




(big angel hugs) Though psychos need to be reached out and provided special needs, and should be restrained from the whole of society until they are disciplined. psychos are human just as any of us and I believe they deserve love just as any living thing in the entire world does! (sigh) Love is what makes the world go round and not one thing SHOULD live without it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2004-02-08 10:09 AM


They do deserve to shown our love ... most certaily
It's our trust, that they'll have to earn

lots to think about here

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3 posted 2004-02-22 09:25 PM


interesting
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