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The Living Roots |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The Living Roots I blossomed underneath the spell Of loving words, you spoke so well. Each day was sweeter than the last, But suddenly, that time was past And you grew distant, even strange. Then everything began to change. So, I know how the flowers feel When cooling weather starts to steal The warmth that they so badly need. The drops of dew that start to bead Upon their petals, looks like tears, But if they're crying, no one hears! Yet down below the withered mass, Protected by the matted grass, Their roots will live the winter through And flower in the springtime too! There is a lesson here I see, That also could apply to me. Someday there'll be a fresh, new start. That creates hope, within my heart! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou There are so many truths in your words which were so beautifully written. For you, my friend Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Betty Lou, This is wonderful. It's the fruit of the "Writer's Prayer" don't you think? I have seen miracles happen because someone took the time to say a few kind words or go out of the way for someone who needed a little special attention. Hats off to you. Love, Barb |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh i love this sad sad poem and especially the ending. you always have something new and amazing to say betty lou. thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us. hugs from june xxxxxxx |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very provoctive Betty. I like it. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks for responding to this and also for the gorgeous picture! Always good to hear from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: Thanks for your meaningful comments. I always look for your reply. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: Thanks for reading. At least this ended on a hopeful note! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thanks Joyce. Always enjoy hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
I only just realised how to Post Reply. I was sending everyone an email. Once again, the poem touched my heart. So beautiful. |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Betty Lou, how true your words are and boy, did I need to hear them today! Thank you for this - your writing is brilliant - as always. Love to you, Shereen. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: Thanks so much for your nice comments. Great to hear from you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shereen: Good to hear from you! Thanks for your comments and glad that this poem spoke to you today! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and it could apply to me too |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thanks for reading this and bringing it back. I guess this could apply to many people! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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