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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Trembling Looking down from high up at myself in the dust, trembling out of tremendous fear, not because of the height phobia, but the worry about every action I am taking. 1/17/2004 ========================= |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh yes i know that feeling well !!! expresed beauifully !! i enjoyed this work. hugs june x |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Getting higher!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed, well written. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good expression...and wise lesson -- the higher you climb, the greater the fall! Enjoyed. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I dig it,,, good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Laoha: I enjoyed your poem and can relate to waht you say. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Looking down on one's life can be scary. Having phobias (like I do) as well,can be even scarier. Great poem. |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
I kind of wrote from where I am looking back into my past. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Very true...a very deep and intense look at yourself! Bravo. ~~ Jamie "I mean the opposite of what I say...you've got it now, no, it's the other way!" Author Unknown |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Thanks! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) I understand just how you feel, sweet friend, I find it's not important trying to get higher, but simply just reaching from where you are, yay, God Bless You, the stars will be just as close on surface level, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laoha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
sometimes I wonder about the effects my actions may cause ... good, bad, expected or un' ... anticipation brings on the trembles sometimes nicely done |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Yes I too can relate to this. Not just every action I take, but re-action. Isobel |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is thought provoking. Nice poem. Barb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Laoha~ Looking back over one's life can be an exhilarating experience as well~ I think we all wonder just where the next step will take us ... but from experience I can say that it's often such a good thing to look not only 'where we're going' ... but pause long enought to see 'where we've been'~ Thanks for the ponderous penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
wow  inspiring neh! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand...good piece |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Oh man! Thanks for reading. I am so happy. |
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