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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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Hair had thickened in folds of auburn lace, brushing cheek, ne'er to touch porcelain bone, divided breaths shivered as hands atoned for ev'ry dulcet sin she e'er effaced. Whispers of day slanted through, onto skin, whilst confessing her need for consonance she implored for silv'ry deliverance from sanctity of cello, souls akin. Lighter, she spindled fingers 'round wood bow tasting chords with a fragrant tragedy, the maple essence knew veins, hopelessly.. her eyes bled glass, for all beauty bestowed. Weeping strings echoed, as she softly found true penance endured in glorious sound. If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a lovely write! Beautiful and graceful. Very well done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gentle Spirit is right...this is very, very good! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Incredibly beautiful... A keeper for my library. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Another masterpiece! Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Incredible poetry! so Melodic...music to heal the soul....Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IndigoEve~ I felt the draw of bow across the strings~ Lovely penning as always~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, IndigoEve! You are a very talented poet! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...what an incredible write! |
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