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Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2004-01-12 03:00 PM

Shamanic?

What if we could step
into tomorrow or maybe
a day or two even more?
What if we could rerun
yesterday's like the present
or perhaps the day before?

Would we correct or score
advantage or dislocation
play God with our times?
Use the ability for riches
or be spiritually pure
right wrongs, commit crimes?

What actions would we be
if in time we could play,
living present in shifting now?
Would if we had too; forsake,
leave behind, never again to touch
would it be worth it...to you?

~~~~~~

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-12 03:22 PM

there have been songs about it,,,,
books fathoming it
and countless wishes lifted up 2 seconds after a deed....
to bad, it cannot be,,,,
good write
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2004-01-12 06:02 PM

mmmmmmm gets you thinking ....... could be so much good yet so much bad that could come from having this ability.

think i like the way things are and reading your poem makes me think more about living the moment and telling those around me how much i care ................. because NOW is just so important.

thanks for this wonderful read, you are an amazing person and poet.

hugs june x

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2004-01-12 08:35 PM

I think we've all had things happen that make us want to turn back the clock. But it doesn't work that way. Joyce

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

4 posted 2004-01-12 09:54 PM

Love of my life if I could but change what has happened in the past then I would have never ended up in your loving embrace and with the love of God so richly on my side. No I don't think changing anything is for me perhaps others but I am quite enthralled to be exactly where I am in this existance we call life. I love u now and always!!!
Annie

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-01-13 07:48 AM

If it were just so easy...ah...but it always isn't. Very well done and excellent writing.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-17 01:53 PM

wow...thought-provoking write

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