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valkyrmaiden New Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 3 |
This is a poem I wrote quite awhile back. I bit long I know, but any comments are welcome There is a war going on Just around the corner And down the street from where I live. Humans killing humans over color of skin, people of kin, Different religions, beliefs, The country’s flag that they bare And the land that they have to share. Mothers giving their babies as missiles To the government fighting for a cause, A break from unjustified laws Yet wanting a pause from the screaming. The sun beaming on a terrain That has broken insane trying to make a gain using hate, While making everyone else face the fate. I once heard through the grapevine That there’s no use in calling yourself good If you don’t do what you should to stop the war That’s going on just around the corner And down the street from where you live. Why stand there doing nothing, letting people die Acting as if everything is great And not a cloud in the sky While the bullets fly into an innocent eye You stop and make a sandwich for lunch? You can’t call yourself good, And then so ‘Oh, well I would if I could,’ Because either way you look at it, you can. And I am. I’m packing my bag, my white dove, And going just around the corner And down the street from where I live. And if anyone walks through that door And asks for my description, You tell him I am the one with the intermixed accent, Slightly British, With a touch of southern charm who sometimes speaks in French. And don’t forget to mention I’m a white Christian African queen who dares to be seen With the Hindus, the Muslims, And every belief and color in between, And lives on no grounds Except for the ones that I believe in. And if he asks where I am, Tell him I am taking a stand, And lending a peaceful hand, Just around the corner, And down the street from where I live. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions. Your first post is a though-provoking right. Well done. I hope to read more of your words. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And if anyone walks through that door And asks for my description, You tell him I am the one with the intermixed accent, Slightly British, With a touch of southern charm who sometimes speaks in French. And don’t forget to mention I’m a white Christian African queen who dares to be seen With the Hindus, the Muslims, And every belief and color in between, And lives on no grounds Except for the ones that I believe in. And if he asks where I am, Tell him I am taking a stand, And lending a peaceful hand, Just around the corner, And down the street from where I live. ~*~ A wonderful first post. Welcome to Passions! I do believe you're going to find yourself right at home. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions... I know you're going to love it here. Please check your email for a special greeting. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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valkyrmaiden New Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 3 |
Hi everyone. Thanks for the replies. I appreciate them. I got the card just now and it was a nice surprise. Thanks! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
long but good and food for thought. welcome hugs from me too june x |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very engaging poetry. Welcome. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome! Beautiful, thought provoking poem! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ValkyrMaiden~ WELCOME to Passions~ A deeply thought out write ... and an enjoyable read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions Good first post...sad, but reality is just that sometimes |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
A piece of art. |
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