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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

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0 posted 2004-01-07 04:11 PM

The waters pull back
The moon tugs at their willing feet

Bringing them deeper
Slaves to its white fire beauty

They wait, expectant
When day breaks they'll crash to the shore

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-01-07 05:48 PM

CopperBell~
I adore the imagery this one left me with~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-01-07 11:31 PM

"Slaves to its white fire beauty". Very cool! I've never heard the moon described so perfectly to me. Very neat write!
Shereen.

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

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3 posted 2004-01-08 08:31 AM

Thanks guys. I appreciate your comments.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-01-17 02:03 PM

excellent!

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2004-01-17 02:26 PM

oh this is so very very beautiful.

excellent write with a marvelous choice of words and images.

hugs june x

Copperbell
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6 posted 2004-01-17 06:21 PM

Thanks guys

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-01-19 12:43 PM

What a scenic picture you've painted! Beautiful.

Copperbell
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8 posted 2004-01-19 09:38 AM

Thank you

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

9 posted 2004-01-19 03:05 PM

Copperbell: This has great imgery!

Betty Lou Hebert

Isobel
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since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

10 posted 2004-01-20 05:06 AM

A tide of change, like our lives. Moons magnetic pull. Just wonderful.

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

11 posted 2004-01-20 09:48 AM

Thanks.

I think we can be much like the waters of the ocean, which maybe isn't such a great thing.

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-02-22 10:33 PM

great imagery here

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