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wintertao
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0 posted 2003-12-24 05:48 PM


'Tis like the Blood
    can find no rest
    in the hearts of man
    and so must turn
    upon itself
Again and Again.

[This message has been edited by wintertao (12-24-2003 05:50 PM).]

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jaicie114
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1 posted 2003-12-26 06:22 PM


wintertao...

You come by your name well...this is an awesome taoist-styled write. It could have so many different meanings and yet is so simple in it's approach. Thank you for sharing this jewel here!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

wintertao
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2 posted 2004-01-03 05:30 PM


thank you so much, tis a smile you bring to my face
iliana
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3 posted 2004-01-19 12:48 PM


Absolutely brilliant -- it made me laugh because it was such a profound point you made!
junemac
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4 posted 2004-01-19 04:12 PM


yes deep deep write and very well written.

enjoyed !!!

hugs june xxxxxxxx

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5 posted 2004-01-19 05:57 PM


oh this is very...hmm...very great!
i cant find the words!
really liked!!!

Trillium
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6 posted 2004-01-19 06:59 PM


wintertao:  This is profoundly stirring!
Glad to see your post here today.

Betty Lou Hebert

Isobel
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7 posted 2004-01-20 05:17 AM


Very deep.  Yes, man is his own worse enemy.


passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-22 10:34 PM


yes....yes indeed
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