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wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2004-01-03 05:29 PM

a chiseled chihuahua
rides on the dash    on the
   felt lookout
for some needed cash
euthenics
in my chewable thoughts
my scratchy head     and
   all those things you said
you got all those charms
on your side    a phonograph
of your little laugh
plays in the dark corner
at last
a feldspar fedora covers up
my oily head
   after I roll out of bed

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gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

1 posted 2004-01-04 05:42 AM

very tasty indeed! i liked this.

Michelle_loves_Mike

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Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-04 09:12 AM

catchy,,,,,has a good beat,,,I give it a thumbs up,,,,,,

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2004-01-05 12:22 PM

very nice.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-01-05 01:01 AM

Honesty, sweet honesty.
I take it, it wasn't friday night.

Liked it, nice, funny and subtle.

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2004-01-05 03:50 AM

neat write

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