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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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No sound save soughs sift sanguinely as moonbeams, impaled, weep bittersweet upon motherly arms of sculpted saguaros basking on raw silken sheets of night. Zepherous promises woo whirlwinds who in turn with tumbleweeds elope upon this plain of broken beams bleeding softly in saguaro embrace. Alicat 12-30-03 |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
the big words in this make my brain hurt...but otherwise it seems groovy gravy okay to me!  - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful. It flows like a quiet river - who would have thought nature would sound so beautiful? Well done!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliCat~ This is truly such a lovely piece~ I'm most impressed ... Honest Injun !!! Happy New Year's thoughts to you and yours~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
I like big words, although I admit I am ignorant to their meaning. I love it though!! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
i love the alliteration in the first line! really great! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It is quite evident you love words and you use them so skillfully. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Alicat: Shows a lot of imagination and very descriptive. I enjoyed reading it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The desert between Yuma and El Centro.... perhaps a parody of the human mind? Well done, Alicat. Much enjoyed the read. CB 8) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...this is an awesome piece to read aloud |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely wonderful! it's a keeper.  [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (01-05-2004 08:08 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
um.. have come back to keep it  |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
You have all been truly wonderful in your replies. When I first wrote this, I got about 3 lines in...then whatever idle thought was powering it simply evaporated. After struggling with it for a few hours, I sent it to PdV to see if it was done or not, as I had no clear notion. What's here is what was sent, and truth to tell, I still don't know if it's 'done'.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LMAO @ River... I to, love the alliterations.... and think it is finished...and nicely done. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ali, finished or not..I love it! And the alliterations are fantastic! Lots of fun to read aloud. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Say that first line three times fast! I love your descriptiveness, Alicat... Write on! Shereen. |
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