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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-23 11:43 AM



I raise my eyes
To heaven…
Seeing your brilliance
Reflected in each
And every moonbeam…
And, your beauty
Twinkling in starshine.
I offer my soul
To your glory…
And the nightbreeze
Answers my prayer.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2003-12-23 08:41 PM


This is lovely Jaicie

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


jaicie114
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2 posted 2003-12-23 09:16 PM


Thank you, Dark Angel...

I am glad you like it...it's kind of a "companion" piece to the one in the open forum...guess I was into "breezes" last night!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-12-23 11:09 PM


Awww this is so sweet. What beautiful words!
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

jaicie114
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4 posted 2003-12-23 11:36 PM


Oh, thank you, Terri...

I always enjoy getting your sweet replies. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2003-12-27 12:30 PM


Nicely said.  Joyce
jaicie114
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6 posted 2003-12-27 11:05 AM


Thank you, Joyce...I always appreciate your kind comments.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Trillium
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7 posted 2003-12-27 10:34 PM


jc:  I enjoyed your lovely poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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8 posted 2003-12-28 08:17 PM


This is quite lovely, Jaicie! Soft and beautiful!
jaicie114
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9 posted 2003-12-29 11:37 AM


Thank you, Betty Lou and Denise...I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-01-03 02:29 PM


a true romantic
Ravenwolfvoyager
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11 posted 2004-01-05 06:30 PM


A very beautiful write. It captivates the soul as when love is first born. Thank you.
jaicie114
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12 posted 2004-01-05 11:01 PM


Dixie and RWV...thank you so much for your replies...they mean so much to me.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Shereen
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 57
Michigan, USA
13 posted 2004-01-06 08:52 AM


There is truly something magical about a clear, starlit night - especially when it can evoke such jubilation in the poet's heart!  Very lovely.
Shereen.

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
14 posted 2004-01-06 08:54 AM


Thank you, Shereen!  Yes, I get a lot of my inspiration from the night sky...it's just so incredibly immense!  Welcome to Passions...I hope you enjoy it here...it's a very special place!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Shereen
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 57
Michigan, USA
15 posted 2004-01-06 11:58 PM


Thank you, yes it is a VERY special place.  Everyone has made me feel so very welcommed here and I'm happy to find such wonderful writings and genuine people.  I've really missed out the last few years... I've missed sharing with kindred hearts.  Good to be back!
Your friend,
Shereen.

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