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jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-16 10:10 AM

Lives come
and lives go.
We’re here
and, then…

We’re
not.

Fleeing time
with only
my heart
to guide me
And You…
intertwined
in the fabric
of my soul.

Yes…

This is enough.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-12-16 01:42 PM

I am glad you have found that which makes you whole. Joyce

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2003-12-17 12:00 PM

Ahhhh, Joyce...

Thank you for your comments...but, this is more wishful thinking that anything else! I'm glad you enjoyed it, though!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-12-17 12:53 PM

Oh my gosh...this was just beautiful!!

)
Lovely.
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

4 posted 2003-12-18 01:08 AM

Thank you, Terri...

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2003-12-18 09:48 AM

I liked how you began the poem with the first stanza.
This hit my heart:
"And You…
intertwined
in the fabric
of my soul."
nice job....
pictureme :-)

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2003-12-18 10:05 AM

I love this! Short, to the point, and an acknowledgement of what's important in your life.

Christmas hugs, Marti

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

7 posted 2003-12-18 11:35 PM

pictureme and Marti...

Thank you so much for your nice comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!

Hope you all have a warm and wonderful holiday!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-12-21 08:07 AM

Yes...it is enough.
Beautifuly told!

Love,
Eric

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-12-21 02:49 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and I wish for true happiness to fill your heart with all you ever need, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaicie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

10 posted 2003-12-21 08:19 PM

Eric and Noah...

I am so glad that you made it over here to read me! I always feel blessed by your comments...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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