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Tangerine Lake ( reworked )
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Tangerine Lake ( reworked ) |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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i really hated this one after i wrote it and it has been playing on my mind lol because i loved the idea of it and wanted to do it better so i have torn the original to pieces and completely reworked it. this is how the new version looks. Tangerine Lake The sun peeks slowly over the lake Slowly rising to kiss the sky Shimmering reflections like scattered gold Adorn the indigo surface of gloss Ink of night is swallowed in the deep Sinking to depths untouched by the light As dappled blue moments emerge to be seen And earth reflections glitter brightly As the morn yawns and stretches its arms A magnificent portrait of new life is born Wildlife brushes fresh colours like paint Animating in mirrors of unique tones Amber shots are a sight to behold Winking between deep sapphire hues A glare of platinum flashes and blinds Imprinting the beauty to a memory on hold The lake warms in a sweet tangerine glow And wind breathes sighs moving water like silk Kaleidoscope of colours pour over all Enhancing dreams with awakening hopes The lake is now dressed and ready for the day Wearing all of the sky and all of the earth Just one more miracle easily passed by A tangerine lake on a canvas of day |
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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
lovely  Meesh |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thanks meesh, it means a lot that you enjoyed this one. hugs june x |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love both poems so much, sweet friend, this new version is also sooooooooo magical and displays the magic and enchanting daybreak, yay! (kiss on cheek) Have the happiest holidays, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Wow, June... I liked the first one...but, this is incredible. Such a wondrous adventure you've written for us. Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
aw thanks noah, you always make me feel good about my poetry. hugs and best wishes with love from june x |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
hi jc, wht a lovely compliment !! i thank you for taking the time to read the revised version and for saying such lovely things about it. I like this version loads better lol !! :0) thanks love june x |
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