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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Begin Where breath feels the chill of life at first step rolling into your day until the end The end comes just when the sunlight gets to know me and the moon tries to seduce my girlfriend. Sleeping as blue-green koi jump Samurai stirs in his silk sheets, his queen's body firmly against his scarred skin, hard battle worn, ancient aches of cold traditions. She gently breathes through the soft hairs on his chest straining to find his heartbeat. A single tear falls, his skin redeemed, the blood flows to the sea in her small hand. Even with insects- |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Whew...Sparticus... I think this is one of the most sensual and intense works I've ever read. Wow.... Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you, J.C. I very much appreciate your reply! Sparticus Even with insects- |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Clapping.I was trying to find a favourite stanza but all the images are of so much interest.. Maggie |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you Maggie. I am so happy you enjoyed this. These are my favorite forms. Sparticus |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sparticus: Very beautiful! You are a master! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I loved the way all flowed into her hands. Left me with the feeling she was his all. Lovely this is! Love, Terri~  Well I will go down with this ship |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Murder in the bamboo bedroom? Clever, if it is. but you say in a response: "These are my favorite forms." Explain? |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
hello jesse at last SMILE wanna beer? beautiful verse amazing yet again Begin Where breath feels the chill of life at first step rolling into your day until the end you write with elegance love Titch |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you kindly, Betty, Terri, K and Titch. K...the forms used are Cinquain, for the first two poems, the second is Sedaka... 7-7-5 times two. The latter form I have used several times to write, this is all part of a series. Thank you for your question. Titch! Nice to see you, I am glad we still have contact! Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love how versatile you are with form in poetry and how all your emotions also flow so organically! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you, Noah! Sparticus Even with insects- |
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