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junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-12-05 05:14 AM

Tangerine Lake

The sun draws closer to the lake
Slowly advancing like a lovers kiss
Waters rippling with anticipation
Shimmer glossy reflections in return

Ink of night is swallowed in the deep
Sinking to depths untouched by the light
As dappled blue moments emerge to be seen
Andearth reflections glitter brightly

The lake warms in a sweet tangerine glow
And wind breathes sighs to shimmer it all
Kaleidoscope of dawn colors pour over all
Enhancing dreams withawakening hopes

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-12-05 08:53 AM

Very pretty colors come to mind, and much heart.

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

2 posted 2003-12-05 09:18 AM

June, I think this is beautiful. I loved the imagery. In my opinion, it's a beatiful poem. I think it is wonderfully crafted and sensitive, and I think it shows that you have a lot of talent.
Barb Gedman

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

3 posted 2003-12-05 10:31 AM

The images here are wonderful. I love the colors and the scents you bring to this.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2003-12-05 11:20 AM

The colorful imagery brings an inviting scene.
Really lovely!

Deb

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2003-12-05 11:30 AM

junemac...

Amazing imagery...thank you for this wonderful retreat!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2003-12-05 06:57 PM

junemac: Very nice! I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-12-06 03:50 AM

makes me thirsty

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-12-06 06:44 PM

(smiles) Yay! You always know how to paint a Sunny Delight, dearest friend, such serenity and comfort fills these beautiful natural words, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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