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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-04 09:47 PM


In the silence of my heart
I hold you there…
Cherished and loved
Precious and true.

In the secret place of my soul
I feel your love...
Radiant and warm
Accepting and welcoming.

In the deepness of my mind
I honor your essence...
Pure and holy
Loving and sacred.

With each beat…
With each breath…
With each thought…

You are mine
And I am yours
And it has been
This way….

Forever.

And, so it shall go on….

Forevermore.



This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (12-04-2003 10:07 PM).]

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pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-12-04 09:55 PM


written with heart, soul and mind...
for eternity!
pictureme :-)

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-12-04 10:08 PM


Thank you so much for your gracious reply, pictureme!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
3 posted 2003-12-05 04:36 AM



dear jacie,
this one is so very touching, i loved the words and thoughts that created this one.

well written, new fan here lol !!


hugs june x

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-12-05 08:57 AM


While I was reading I could feel like a falling feeling...it was me falling in love with this poem. What a delight this was to read. Very nice!
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
Posts 245

5 posted 2003-12-05 10:22 AM


I feel your conviction in this one.


Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
6 posted 2003-12-05 11:24 AM


Hi, All!

Thank you for your wonderful comments!

june...wow! Thank you...I don't think I've ever had a "fan" before!  

Shara...I'm so glad you enjoyed "falling" with me!

And, Sparticus...hmmm...you noticed that, huh? Very perceptive of you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

7 posted 2003-12-05 01:45 PM


jacie this is so beautiful. It is easy to see that you put all your heart and soul into it. maggie
jaicie114
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Posts 750
On the edge of forever
8 posted 2003-12-05 05:50 PM


Thank you, Maggie...

Yes, this one was "close"!! LOL  I'm glad you liked it!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-12-06 06:40 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and I wish for this smile in your heart to glimmer forever, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is scintillating, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaicie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
10 posted 2003-12-06 11:13 PM


Noah...

Thank you so much for your comments. I'm glad you found this scintillating!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
11 posted 2003-12-09 07:40 PM


Great Job! I love this.....

Ranea

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
12 posted 2003-12-10 02:15 AM


Spoken so truthfully.  Such nice words, thanks for sharing them.

KWM

Life is a path, not a destination.  We travel along it one way or another.  Always going somewhere but never ariving.  Walking the path is always bett

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
13 posted 2003-12-14 07:03 PM


Ranea & KWM...

Thank you so much for your replies. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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