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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Unicorn Leaping By: Noah Eaton 11/5/02 Genuflecting on your nightingale song I can't tell Ursa Major from Ursa Minor Both constellations seem just as bright to me When I watch as your green eyes shimmer Ophiuchus can't charm the serpents as you do You set Andromeda free with one pirouetting kiss So love, give me your hand, we'll go leaping with the unicorns Deep in the merengue heavens caressed by your fingertips Carefree cheerful cherubs chortle over your connubial castles Amorously admiring with argus-eyed affection your ascending aureole Hipparchus could never rank your brightness with the other stars Prima facie, I felt an avatar of a lost boys smile through your red velvet carol And through your billet-doux I knew the afterglow you give is true Your heart beats in my head, a vagary flying like a badminton birdee So fast I can't explain what only God can, of how I deeply love you Pantheon is too small a place to commemorate the anatomy of your grace So I'll start from scratch and I promise I won't skip a detail Free of any manicure, foofaraw, or pulchritude Because God made you with all of the beautiful gifts that couldn't fit in any idyll Come sweetheart, we'll go unicorn leaping Through the bubblegum spiderwebs we'll gallop and wail And against the blueberries and cream horizons I'll caress your joyous diamond tears under your starry veil Unicorn leaping... Holding you in my lap, suckling your sweet kiss of candy As I tuck you into white dreams Married together on this chariot ride Married within your eyes aposelene...  "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-01-2003 10:27 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
WOW Noah this love just encompasses the universe. Lovely this is! I very much enjoyed this!!! I loved the Unicorn, and her baby. Thanks for sharing this.  Love, Terri~  |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Very visual, Noah, with a lot of interesting names. A real fantasy feel to it. Sparticus |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh Noah, You have left the unicorns behind with your magnificent leaping of poetry. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Beautiful! Like a trip to Fairyland! Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Noah, this is sweet and fun! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
So beautiful to read and look at Noah, you have excelled yourself. maggie |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
A very creative write with alot of wonderful images. Loved the unicorn picture. A beautiful message! pictureme :-) |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Quite beautiful, I must say. Reminded my of old stories of unicorns my grandmother used to tell me when I was a small boy...I still remember them even to this day, over a decade after she told me those old stories. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Noah; I love the mystical magical way this poem flows with your gift with words and awesome imagination! so beautiful! hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
This flows eloquently... like a liquid vision. Beautifully done. Shereen. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Noah, you write such magic. Wonderful. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is terrific, Noah! Barb |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah, this is beautiful. You know how I love the ancient stories and mythololgy. I heard once the unicorn was a bearer of good luck. Beautiful imagery. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
awww, this is koool...reminds me of that 80's movie...Legend, lol, groovy dude!!! keep writing =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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