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hibby716
New Member

since 2003-12-01

Posts 5
watertown, NY USA

0 posted 2003-12-01 10:17 PM

feeling in the pit of stomach
the depth of soul
the eternal feeling it stutters
its like it was lost
its like the feeling has been crushed to nothing
when all is not lost, it’s there
misses its percussions
it misses you….
love is what I feel
burns so bright when you’re around
burns brighter when you’re not here,
all days are bad
all my days end up being sad
I miss your touch, miss your loving arms
its this love that keeps me going
its this love that keeps me down
its this love that keeps me missing you

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-12-01 10:24 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Jason, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I understand this desire ever so much and I wish for soon the yearning to fade and the love is forever singing in you! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2003-12-01 10:28 PM

hibby716: Very expressive poem! Welcome to Corner Pub and hope you will also check out some of the other sites here. We all enjoy meeting new poets.

Please watch for a specail e-mail.

Best wishes
Trillium

Betty Lou Hebert

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-12-01 11:07 PM

Wonderful poem...much enjoyed.
Welcome to Passions.
I look forward to more of your work.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Let peace begin with me...

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-12-02 12:08 PM

Oh..this is so sad..so much pain from these lines...made me feel a cry coming on. I hope you get better very soon. This is a VERY hurtful place to be. Sending a hug.

Love,
Terri~

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2003-12-03 10:41 AM

Dear Jason,

this is good, I like it!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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