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A Poem In Search Of Me
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A Poem In Search Of Me |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
It's just a... well, lack of sleep. Stumbling yes. Marching my way in stutter steps up the d o w n escalator. Winded, sliding along steel that feels like oiled glass. But I am not falling... no just making my way down into a bird bath in the cinder and brick side walk. For the feathers because I want to be your angel... No it isn't me that you wanted, but... I am not falling... no we just talked about what was rattling in blue sentences made up of concrete, cooled by the shade of my body falling and my lips sucking the pools in the cracks of your mouth that tell me You are falling in love. [This message has been edited by Sparticus (11-25-2003 08:55 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jesse~ Just one great big *SIGH* after another~ Love this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you so much, Marge. I am one in love fellow, but that is probably not surprising. Jesse Even with insects- |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Sparticus... You are so very good with imagery. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I felt myself falling.... falling. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sparticus: I loved the light-heartedness of this! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you, J.C, Joyce and Betty, much appreciated that you read and enjoyed this. The one in love....Sparticus. Even with insects- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I haven't fallen in true love yet but I dream of it so much and it ust be a heavenly feeling! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you my good friend, Noah, you are quite the reader and I know that we all love you too. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool...yes, very cool |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you very much! Sparticus Even with insects- |
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