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Presence |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Presence The night is cold and clear. The moon is wary. Seems to peer Behind a veil of mist, a-glow, With light reflected from the snow. A mystery invades The shadowed, forest glades. I feel a presence in the dark. An emanation from the bark On each snow-shrouded, silent tree And frosted bush I see! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (11-24-2003 01:26 PM).] |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Cool rhyming and images in this one. I love the feel of looking out a window at a snowy scene. Sparticus. Even with insects- |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sparticus: Thanks for reading and commenting! I have a very snowy scene to look out at. About a foot of snow and more coming! Looks like a Christmas card! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It's been a long time since I have seen a snowy Thanksgiving, but we have our rain. Loved your poem. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce; I would gladly shift a good half of what we have, over to your place! We are over a foot and counting! Beautiful to look at, but hazardous to travelers. Betty Lou Hebert |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I loved the beautiful images that came to my mind while reading this. Very nice! Love, Terri~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, thank you, Trillium... I'll take some of that snow you are shoveling to other places. Down here in Orlando, we're just hoping that the air conditioning doesn't break down for the Thanksgiving weekend! It sure is nice to be able to at least vicariously have "normal" weather. (A friend just moved and now has a fireplace...she said that they've made a deal that when the temp drops below 65, they can use it! Now...that's just not right!) Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara Rose: Thanks for reading! I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Happy Thanksgiving! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
jc: Thanks for responding! We have about 14 or 15 inches of snow tonight. Had to drive through it to town today........only about 15 miles.....but it took a long time to get there, the roads were so bad. We won't see 65 degrees around here until next May or June and we sure won't be building fires in the fireplace! We had such a mild winter last year, I guess nature is making up for it now! have a great Thanksgiving! Betty Lou Hebert |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
As always I enjoy your poetry. I have no frost on my trees... florida. Needless to say, I enjoy cool weather since I get very little. Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Betty, I just love the gorgeous serenity of your poetry, sweet friend, it is like you're painting Bob Ross paintings of all natural surroundings and your poetry casts light and makes them all glossy and glittery! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Deb: Thanks and I'm happy to hear you enjoy my poetry! About this time of year, after the first big snow, I think longingly of Florida!! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Your comments are always so thoughtful! I love nature and I am constantly being inspired by it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me wish for snow |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Come on up to North idaho There's more than enough snow to share! Betty Lou Hebert |
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