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Sparticus
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0 posted 2003-11-24 10:50 AM



We pose in black and white
and all the reds, browns and flushed
colors of pink bending across
culture, language, age and hair
as your face shines upon your neck
like a balloon and mine melts with
candle light smoke of your hair
laying across my arm. I am half a
head taller with lips finding your ears
long enough to whisper, "te amo" and
retreat as the camera beeps into a
clacking flash and we are stuck on
photo paper in a frame that tells me
I am a happy fool
dancing a crazy dance,
with a happy fool
dancing in crazy feet;
across the wall we walk
now that nothing is impossible.

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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Trillium
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1 posted 2003-11-24 01:14 PM


Sparticus:  This one made me smile!  We just had a family portrait taken and the photographer wanted us all leaning together and looking happy!  No small feat for 11 people and a baby.........especially the baby!

This is cleverly worded and sets a definite atmostphere!  I love it!

Trillium

Betty Lou Hebert

Sparticus
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2 posted 2003-11-24 02:08 PM


Thank you, there is a feeling in those photos of what there is that moment, captured so well in a glossy. I hope yours turned out well!


Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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3 posted 2003-11-24 06:54 PM


Jesse~
I can only frame this *snapshot* with *sighs*~

So very, very lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sparticus
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4 posted 2003-11-25 02:50 AM


Thank you Marge you are so delightful with your responses.  Thank you again!

Jesse

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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5 posted 2003-11-26 07:11 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you know how I love happy dances and this made my heart smile and bounce as I love those Kodak moments! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a precious image, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sparticus
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6 posted 2003-11-27 02:43 AM


Thank you so much Noah, I am so happy that you did enjoy it.

Sparticus

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7 posted 2003-12-01 07:18 PM


Sparticus, another great poem, look forward to reading more!
Sparticus
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8 posted 2003-12-02 02:31 AM


I am glad you like the poems, Cat.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

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