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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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just collective thoughts here and working on them . The end of day The sun ,stained pink As if dipped in candy Draws wearily to the earth Ribbons of powder blue Scrape torn cotton clouds Submitting to deep evening hue The air mellows softly With the age of the day Comforter for night drawing near Cares lift and float With the end of day To return with the shadow of sun |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Such a beautiful ending stanza to a lovely poem. Got to me the last sranza. Maggie |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Very nicely done stream, I enjoyed the final stanza too. Sparticus |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: A lovely description of day ending and the last line is haunting! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you paint your poetry with such color and texture, yay! (kiss on cheek) I just love those sherbet daybreaks, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
I like the imagery, and the subject is tight. Soothing piece, enjoyed! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples." |
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