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tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
Posts 83
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0 posted 2003-11-20 06:19 PM



Entrenched desire breaks a sweat
Heated by poisoned ego
Gifted by the Gods to please
Burdened by loves demanding hold
Take the flower in practiced hands
Lap up the petals with buds of taste
Fertile soil beneath such charm
Inexperienced blossom grown from seed
Hunger bleeds from this open rose
Desire the sun which feeds
Spread open these red lips of aroma
Inhaling the depths of you fragrance
Salty, lush bitterness

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1 posted 2003-11-20 09:18 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is very heartfelt poetry, dearest friend, I could sense a bit of anguish here and I hope now sweetness has cleansed away the bitterness once felt! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tecoyah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
2 posted 2003-11-21 03:06 AM


echoes of sadness and such beautiful words and imagery.

enjoyed this one.
hugs june x

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-21 04:34 AM


you expressed it well
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