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junemac
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0 posted 2003-11-20 03:25 AM




Goodbye My Love
Rose petals fall softly
Floating gently to land
Like the soft kisses
He placed on my cheeks
As he bid me goodbye


The sun will always rise
A heart full of promise
Like the yearning in me
For his blessed return

Clouds darken and swell
pregnant with raindrops
As my soul fills with love
That waits only for you

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-20 04:07 AM


what a vision! I love this!
cusick
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2 posted 2003-11-20 08:23 AM


Clapping. So very beautiful. Maggie
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-20 09:06 AM


June~
You took such a sad word ... and swirled it in beautiful thoughts~
I like this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-11-20 10:45 AM


Tears :'(
Love,
Terri~

Sparticus
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5 posted 2003-11-20 03:25 PM


I enjoyed the feel of this Aubade like poem, a sweet saddness in a beautiful, expressive piece.

Sparticus

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some can sing
some can't

-Issa

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-20 04:28 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sucha heartfelt write and I send many angel hugs your way! (sigh) May loves bliss fill your deserving heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-11-21 12:03 PM


junemac:  Very touching!  

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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8 posted 2003-11-21 02:19 AM


passing shadow, maggie and marge,

thank you all so very much for your words of encouragement. I am trying to grow as a poet ( as we all are ) and trying out new things this one became a close one to me. i am glad you all enjoyed it and that you took time to tell me so.

thank you my lovely friends.
hugs june x

junemac
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9 posted 2003-11-21 02:21 AM


terri and sparticus, i am pleased that you found this beautiful and moving. I think love is an endless subject and never tire of it.

hugs june x

junemac
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10 posted 2003-11-21 02:24 AM


awwwwwwwww betty lou and noah, you are both so lovely to me. I always know you will make me smile with your lovely replies.
While on this subject, i would like ato say a big thank you to both of you for always taking time to comment on our poems ( you must dedicate so much time to this )


so thank you, its much appreciated.

hugs from june x

Hockeychick19
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11 posted 2003-11-21 04:30 PM


June this is so beautiful... I love it.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2003-11-21 05:06 PM


you have written this so well...

regards
sudhir

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13 posted 2003-11-22 11:47 AM


This is lovely, June.  I apologise for not being around to read it sooner.  Love, Joyce
jaicie114
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14 posted 2003-11-22 11:02 PM


Hi, June...

Thank you for expressing these thoughts in such an exquisite style. You have touched my heart.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

junemac
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15 posted 2003-11-24 03:22 AM


Dear JC, Joyce, Suhir and Kelly,

I am thrilled to know you all enjoyed this one.i submitted it to another site too and no one commented and yet i felt that i had pored lots of love and tender thoughts into this one.
You have made my day today to know that you enjoyed this one.

thank you all so much.

hugs of plenty from june x

paraboxer
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16 posted 2003-11-24 08:02 PM


Sorry this one's tardy, but this poem was something I can relate too somewhat. I wait for someone special and this poem spoke volumes to me, despite its brevity. Excellent work.
cusick
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17 posted 2003-11-25 05:52 AM


Absolutely lovely, in particular the last verse. Maggie
BloomingRose
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18 posted 2003-11-26 03:17 PM


Very nice!

Deb

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