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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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Like a peppermint hit My breath is stopped Like a blast of air Your memory shocks It has the ability To mix pleasure and pain To make me want you Loving me again My blood seems to dance On the way to my heart When i think of you Even when we're apart Like martini bubbles I fizz warmly inside stirred by your passion Excitement i can't hide Such a dizzying feeling Like a waltzing spin Sends shivering spasms from the outside in Such is the feeling In my feverish soul Cured only by loving I am out of control |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute and well-said, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so much in my dreams and dream so much to get to hold the hand of my dream girl! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, may true love fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Yes, many of us have felt these feelings before. Obviously myself. I really like how you've captured this emotion in few words. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: A captivating poem! I enjoyed it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you all very much. i enjoy writing this kind of poem. hugs june x |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Good for you. Nice to feel like this. I like this. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pass some of that my way |
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