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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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On Paths the Moon Has Laid Into the twilight, with soft tread, I walked to meet the night ahead. Behind me lay a dying day, Which still shed light upon my way. The path led to a canyon old, Where miners once had searched for gold And far below, I heard the sound Of water rushing, ocean bound. I settled on a sandy spot, Upon a blanket I had brought, Prepared to watch the full moon rise. The breeze was warm and uttered sighs. The darkness lightened in the east. I heard the snort of some wild beast, Then realized that horses came Along this draw that bears their name. For Wild Horse Canyon, it's been known. Then suddenly the fall moon shone Across the hills and lit the scene With lusterous radiance, serene And after I had basked awhile Beneath it's glowing, secret smile, I gathered up my things and made My way, on paths the moon had laid! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (10-31-2003 01:49 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh this is just beautiful!!! I have seen this happen before. Light that's in a stream on the ground where there is no other city lights. WOW....this took me back a long time. Love, Terri~  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara Rose: Thanks so much for commenting and glad it brought back some nice memories for you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
An absolutely exquisite picture you have painted here Betty Lou. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You are such an accomplished poetess~ My gawd ... this is gorgeous` Of course having the moon in the title didn't hurt my feelings any !!  'And after I had basked awhile Beneath it's glowing, secret smile, I gathered up my things and made My way, on paths the moon had laid!' You are BEAUTIFUL~ *Huglets* AND ...  to my fella - Hi ya' Ron Happy Halloween and thank you, my friend, for the wonderful card! I LOVE YOU TOO~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Betty, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm always happy to ead your moonstruck poetry as it sheds light all across these pumpkin patch pages! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Into the twilight, with soft tread, I walked to meet the night ahead. Behind me lay a dying day, Which still shed light upon my way." This is so beautiful and serene Betty Lou. Enjoyed this piece so very much. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ *Thank you very much for your well wishes* ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is so very lovely. I 'd like to go along on your adventures. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks for taking time to read. I always enjoy hearing from you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I thought the moon might draw you in! Your comments are prizes for me!Thanks so much! Ron sends love back and is happy you enjoyed his card. We went to his sister's for Halloween and he had a great time! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: So nice to hear from you and hope you had a happy Halloween! Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Nancy: I'm happy to see your posts again and hope you stay well! Thanks for the nice comments. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks for your response and you are welcome to come along with me, anytime! If we lived closer, you could! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Betty Lou, you certainly have a way with words! Sooooooo gorgeous! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: Nice to hear from you and glad you liked this! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Betty,I seriously think that that is the most beautiful title I have ever seen.Shoot, I wish I had thought of it!  You drew me in with this title and I was entranced by moonlit serenity! "Keeper" for me.We're gonna have to talk about the possibility of making this a song title...don't worry...I'll split the royalties  Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Geoffrey: Thanks and I'm pleased you liked this well enough to think of music to go with it. Royalties are always nice!! Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Betty, this is lovely! and romantic too! awww i luvit! *huGz* Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Michelle: Nicde to hear from you. Thanks for responding! Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is gorgeous! You should consider posting in Open, more people to share your talent with |
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b.costen Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 107ontario, CAN |
that's quite an impressive piece, I loved the imagery and the sense i was on the freaking moon... sent shivers down my spine :] so what's it going to be then, eh? |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Passing Shadows: Thanks for the nice compliment. I posted in Open a long time ago, but everything moves so fast and I never got many comments, so I came to Corner Pub. Maybe I'll give it another try! Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
b.costen: Thank you for reading and commenting. I see you are a new member, so welcome to Passions and Corner Pub. Hope you will enjoy it here and make some good friends. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Dear Betty Lou, I never cease to be amazed. I go through these and they are captivating. I am so so happy that you are my friend. Love, Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: Thank you so much for your sweet comments! I am glad you are my friend too! Every day! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good work... best quality! Grover. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you Grover! Appreciate hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as always, stunning! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thank you so much! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Betty Lou I thought I lost this message and re-wrote it. Love Isobel |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Oh Betty Lou!!! Just brilliant. This poem reminds me of when I visited a friend of mine who lived on the coast. She lived directly across the road from the ocean and four floors up in a high rise building. When the moon rose high in the sky, it shone a wide yellow path across the ocean. You could feel as if you could walk on it. We were in awe and it took our breath away. By the time we came to our senses and thought of taking a picture, the magic was gone. Your talent certainly surpasses mine. Love Isobel |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: What a gorgeous picture you paint with your words. The full moon over the ocean is breath-taking I know. My talent may be different than yours but does not surpass it! You are very talented and I enjoy your work! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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