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junemac
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0 posted 2003-10-25 06:29 AM



In Dreams
In dreams you still kiss my eyes
You were always so gentle, so sweet
Waking me with Soft skin stokes
Sweeping gentle fingers across my brow

We were an eternal tender duet
Whispering together away from earth
Untouched by all but the stars
Fiercely defending what was ours

Tragically ended with a final kiss
I am still locked in that moment
Echoes of perfect music still sting
In dreams you still kiss my eyes  

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-25 12:09 PM


this is very lovely and I enjoyed and was saddened.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2003-10-25 02:43 PM


june:  Very touching and sad!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-10-25 05:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh June, the ending made me cry, dearest friend, I sure hope love is once again kissing your eyelids when you're awake too as your golden heart is so deserving of timeless happiness! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-10-26 12:05 PM


:'( I pray sweet peace for you. I hope you will for me, too.
Love,
Terri~

junemac
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5 posted 2003-10-27 08:22 AM


awww thanks for all your lovely mesages. nothing lifts my spirits quite like you all do.
hugs from june xxxxxxxx

pegasus111
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6 posted 2003-10-28 05:04 PM


I really enjoyed this piece. it stirred memories long since forgotten. thank you for sharing.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



aries_luv_ppl
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7 posted 2003-10-28 10:39 PM


hey I like this piece. Long time no see. Or shall I say I long time no visit this site.

Eliza Simmons
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~Yesterday insult, today gain.

gringakiwi
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8 posted 2003-10-29 05:43 PM


Junemac
This is lovely, and so sad. Often I find my dearly departed in the little place between sleep and awake where I can control my dreams. You wrote this with such tenderness, its beautiful.
Connie

junemac
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9 posted 2003-10-30 03:03 AM


thank you pegasus, eliza and connie.

I particularly enjoyed writing this one.
Eliza i missed u too hon.

connie sweetie i am sending prayers and big hugs your way. keep your wakeful dreams. they may be painful but they are beautiful and in a strange way comforting.

love june x

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10 posted 2003-10-30 06:38 AM


Powerful, that's all I can really say.
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