Corner Pub #2 |
In Dreams |
junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
In Dreams In dreams you still kiss my eyes You were always so gentle, so sweet Waking me with Soft skin stokes Sweeping gentle fingers across my brow We were an eternal tender duet Whispering together away from earth Untouched by all but the stars Fiercely defending what was ours Tragically ended with a final kiss I am still locked in that moment Echoes of perfect music still sting In dreams you still kiss my eyes |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
this is very lovely and I enjoyed and was saddened. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
june: Very touching and sad! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh June, the ending made me cry, dearest friend, I sure hope love is once again kissing your eyelids when you're awake too as your golden heart is so deserving of timeless happiness! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
:'( I pray sweet peace for you. I hope you will for me, too. Love, Terri~ |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awww thanks for all your lovely mesages. nothing lifts my spirits quite like you all do. hugs from june xxxxxxxx |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I really enjoyed this piece. it stirred memories long since forgotten. thank you for sharing. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hey I like this piece. Long time no see. Or shall I say I long time no visit this site. Eliza Simmons |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Junemac This is lovely, and so sad. Often I find my dearly departed in the little place between sleep and awake where I can control my dreams. You wrote this with such tenderness, its beautiful. Connie |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you pegasus, eliza and connie. I particularly enjoyed writing this one. Eliza i missed u too hon. connie sweetie i am sending prayers and big hugs your way. keep your wakeful dreams. they may be painful but they are beautiful and in a strange way comforting. love june x |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Powerful, that's all I can really say. |
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