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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Kite tail waves to all Dips and soars in graceful flight Airborne sky ballet Spring breeze, kites and trees Kite dances on the zephyrs Tree waits to embrace Colorful flyers Kaleidoscopic vision On sky blue canvas Suspended on air Familiar shapes with long tails Child's laughter heard Like a falling star Kite descends in earthbound plunge Ne'er to fly again 5-16-2001 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Dennis! You are soooo good at these! This gave me a feeling of those carefree days of childhood! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, this was great. I really enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Your imagery is perfect and the ending is so true so many times. I can hardly wait to fly another this year with my granddaughters. Melton |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
These are your best ever! What beautiful images and exquisite composition of words! Bravo! The King of haiku reigns! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very good. Nothing more to say about kites. Joyce |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
One of my favorite subjects, and you have covered it very well, except Kite caught in a tree..... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very detailed images, dennis....i especially related to your last senryu  |
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