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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Tears unshed Are a bitter lake To drown my soul In liquid ache Waves of hurt In relentless tide Break the heart I cleverly hide Misery and pain Wear a face of stone That crumbles to dust When im all alone In the privacy of night All pretence is shed And into my pillow All my agony is bled |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Very meaningful my friend. I can sympathize since I am going through a similar situation (explained in my work My Own Lili Marlene.) Thanks for sharing, poetry is truly cathartic to pain... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh June, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, tis is ever so common and I too have cried on my pillow so much in my childhood, but knowing that since turning to Him and feeling more happier than ever, this too will pass and your heart will heal! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: I do hope this is a product of your imagination and not your reality! Very touching. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like Trillium, hope this is only poetic fantasy and not a hurtful situation. Very touching poetry. Love, Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
My heart bleeds from the wounds of a thousand piercing needles and my soul cries out in agony through my pen. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Junemac This is so lovely, however sad, I hope that you are alright now. Connie. xx |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
In the privacy of night All pretence is shed And into my pillow All my agony is bled So true for so many. Enjoyed. Melton |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Truly touching. I can definately relate to this. I hope everything is better now. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
aww bless you all for reading and enjoying ( i hope lol ) This poem was really just my imaginings of how it is too be heart broken like this. I have a happy and long term (25 years ) marriage and most of my poetry is not based on fact (only occasionally ) its lovely to know that my friends here care about me this way. i feel so blessed to know you all ( even virtually ) so i dont want you to worry. hugs from june xxxxxxxxxx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it |
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