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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2003-09-22 12:00 PM


Heather;

i am so sorry if i got the wrong idea...
your comment the other night inflamed me, i guess.
will you forgive me?
i guess i'm taking things way too literal...
misunderstanding your teasing?
will you pardon me?

i am taking your advise and that of other
loved ones who have said the same
getting in touch with the inner-buttnik.
lol maybe someday i can handle him alone
even grow to like him, or so i'm assured
i don't know, i don't know, i don't know.

anyway, please forgive my social retardation
and please don't hesitate... i will await,
stand by your side anytime, anyway, any situation.
just don't hate me for wanting to kiss you
'cause the snuggles would be pure heaven
lol see there i go again...

Can't help myself at all,
just a puppy at heart i suppose
perhaps just older, housebroken is all.
A helplessly deluded? devoted? romantic
i beg your mercy in judgment, my lady
i stand in ready to be your knight...
we can always hire a knave to polish the armor.

hugz,
Danimal


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[This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (09-22-2003 09:30 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Richy
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1 posted 2003-09-22 02:37 AM



Hi Daniel, it's nice meeting you. It sounds like one of those misunderstandings that happen all the time. I'm sure she'll understand.

Thanks for sharing such a personal slice of your life.

Enjoyed the write!

Richy


Trillium
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2 posted 2003-09-22 03:00 PM


Tramp Poet:  I am hoping Heather will accept your very eloquent apology!

Betty Lou Hebert

BabieDoll
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3 posted 2003-09-22 04:03 PM


This was a touching piece and I'm glad I came into the forum and found it! LOL. Your word usage was different from what I usually see and I liked that a lot. I hope to read more from you Tramp Poet! *giggles*

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

Denise
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4 posted 2003-09-26 01:32 PM


Who could resist an apology like that?! Nicely done, Daniel!
junemac
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5 posted 2003-09-26 01:38 PM


what a lovely way to apologize and you do it so well. I can tell this comes straight from the heart and i am keeping my fingers crossed for you to get a smile and forgivenesss.

hugs june x

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
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6 posted 2003-09-26 04:56 PM


Please let us know what "M'Lady" says....(.if we can intrude further.)
The poem struck home to me...been there, done that.   THANKS.

gringakiwi
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7 posted 2003-09-26 10:49 PM


awwwwww... if she doesnt forgive you after this, then I wouldnt know what to do!
nicely written,
Connie

Tramp Poet
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8 posted 2003-09-27 11:18 AM


thank y'all for the encouragement!
yes i was forgiven and now have
working boundries for my new poetic
partner. She has recently joined our family here and i am looking forward to seeing
her posts...ummm dear heart?
we have been developing several "duets" and
our partnership has the potential to produce some outstanding interactive work...in my opinion. She is unsure as of yet about posting/publishing but i'm sure she will come to know this site is full of loving, caring support for her as it has been for all of us...thank you Ron and all the "pip"ers.
Daniel

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9 posted 2003-09-27 01:14 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Daniel, I am so happy that all was forgiven, sweet friend, if someone said an apology like this to me, I would most happily accept it and give that person a big angel hug! (smiles) This is a most heartfelt and honest apology, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Joyce Johnson
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10 posted 2003-09-28 12:38 PM


Congratulations on your new, loving partnership and I hope to welcome her to this corner soon.  Love, Joyce
Annie78
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11 posted 2003-10-03 06:57 PM


i am not the knave...but would still
like to extend the hand of friendship
to my man's poet partner...she will forever
have a place in his heart and will be welcomed open armed to mine. i can share poetry and friendship...JoAnne

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-10-23 04:22 AM


aw...this is touching
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