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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Love: "To experience deep affection or intense desire for another." Shall we entwine as I whisper murmurs of deep, overwhelming desire touching your heart as you have mine? Afraid, unsure ofintense beginnings holding back a defense, frightened somewhat... memories of pain haunting, as we struggle. We struggle to break free of hurtful past building tomorrows formed of todays emotions, devotion...awakened, aroused. Perhaps unreal;dreaming, or so it seems can happiness really be together as one as we build separate into something ours. Too soon to speak the "L" word advised to go slow, take our time afraid to speak it... making haste slowly. Can it be...for you and old, silly me will the love be expressed, shared, matured shall i scream it from the rooftops, my dear? My lady of love; I shall whisper, I shall murmur, I shall shout, I shall declare, I shall proclaim, I shall define my love speaking your name. You say to me; "be sure, please don't hurt me" I can only reply... " you are my beloved" sure as sure can ever be... thee, thee, thee. ~~~~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Daniel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, let those lungs be filled and bellow your love over the rooftops of the world in song! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, JoAnne's heart is bound to be touched and melted deeply by this gorgeous serenade, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Good luck pal. Be sure to tell her how you feel before extenuating circumstances get in the way (my poem Lili Marlene explains this). Tell her how you feel before it's too late in gesture and in word. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
My best wishes for you and your love. You are right to take it slow. Joyce |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
What did aesop say? slow but sure wins the race. Well written, and so heartfelt. Lovely write, Connie. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
dear noah...yes i do and did love my man's poetry...my heart is bound to this man forever because he is the only man in the world that can make me cry happy tears. JoAnne...who is Danny's Annie forever and ever and ever...thanks |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
i'm so sorry i disappointed you, my first reply to this is still true tho circumstances would say no. be happy Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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