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Morning Routine |
gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Morning Routine In the sharp light of early morning god, I wish I could be your cigarette inhaled slowly through your mouth hand held and touched by your lips Imagining sinking into you I'm so jealous of your aftershave to lovingly scent your throat would surely be bliss, indeed Think of me just like gardenia overflowing your kitchen window box I'm jealous of your garden I want you to dig me, too Instead, I stand here at the bus stop we wait, and you leave, not looking back. Craving you, I leave, annoyed I watch you but you dont see. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is straight from the heart. Enjoyed. Reminds me of Shania Twain's song where she says..."I'm even jealous of the rain." hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
It's always so hard to crave something you can't have, isn't it? Your emotions come through very strongly. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I could like this routine... Very good! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Gringakiwi, this was so lush and desirable, it left me yearning for more! A fascinating write! Richy |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
excellent. This is very clever and very sad. ahhhhhhhh life is so annoying sometimes. hugs to you xxxxxxx june xxxxxx |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Thanks guys for your lovely comments. I find frustration is often the best thing for inspiration!! Connie PS He talked to me today- he said "do you have the time?". oh well,its a start! lol. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Lovely and full of yearning. If only they could but read our thoughts sometimes. Sweet one. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Connie, this is so very heartachingly beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling of want ever soooooo much and it can happen ever so often but know that there is one who is true and free that you'll soon have forever! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good! I enjoyed this! |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Thankyou Shararose, Denise and Noah for your encouragement! (noah you always say such beautiful things to brighten my day!) hugs to one and all! Connie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked this alot |
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