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Almost Heaven |
junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Just before dusk lays its ebony veil Is an incredible beauty you can almost inhale Rich warm air settles sweetly in calm Soothing body and heart with its whispering balm Trees silhouetted on an amber sky A black lace salute to day gone by Soft gauzy clouds weave purple streaks In magnificent backdrop to mountain peaks A miracle in music gently occurs As humanity quietens and wilderness stirs Heaven is sent in the hour before night Bathing our world in its peaceful light |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is simply lovely - just what I needed to-day. Thankyou for sharing this with us. hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: Serene and lovely! I could picture the scene you were writing about. Nice work! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
As lovely as a breeze..Very nice to read! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
June you really put me in seventh heaven here! This was just sooo good! I really enjoy your style of writing. Nirvana, Utopia, and Paradise all wrapped in one. “A black lace salute to day gone by” Simply Heavenly! Richy |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Junemac, What can I say? Beautiful as always.. (and hows your new grandson?!) Connie xx |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awwwww bles you all i am overwhelmed with your lovely responses to my poem. i am glad you all enjoyed it and it seems to have given out the vibes intended. thanks again you are all lovely. hugs june x |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
hello connie, thank you so much and my grandson number one is two today lol !!!! my se3cond ( new grandson is two weeks and two days old today lol. how lovely of you to remember hon. thanks xxxxxxxx hugs xxxxxxxxxxx june |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I always love watching the sunrise and sunset, sweet friend, those two times of day are just an arm reach from heaven! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I think the sunset, like the rainbow, is God's promise for another wonderful day. You described it beautifully. Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, June! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY WORDS NOAH ! i loved this of yours and wish i had added this to the poem lol just an arm reach from heaven! lovewly pic too. how do you do that ? hugs june xxxxxxx |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Joyce and Denise, thanks for reading this and thanks for taking time to comment and say you liked it. Joyce i agree its a gift from god every day. hugs and thanks as ever for all your support june xxxxxxxxxxx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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